[dhcwg] Some suggestions on draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption

Hi Mark,

      I have some minor suggestions on this draft:

* In Abstract, it would be good to expand:

"The suboption carries an identifer that uniquly identifies a Relay Agent. This identifier can be configured or generated in Relay Agent"

* In last paragraph of Introduction, A typo "carries an sequenect" -> "carries a sequence"

* In section 4, in statement "Relay Agent who use generated identifiers should make the generated", do you think we should use SHOULD instead of should.

* Do you think it will be helpful to add a use case for the relay id usage? For example: we have proposed to use this in our Bulk Lease Query draft.

Thanks,
Bharat

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